Well, my summer resolution is to explore all of St Albert’s 99.5km of trails is well underway! I’m always wondering why can’t they just make that extra 500m to get 100km? Come on St Albert. Despite the foreboding clouds, I headed out to tick off another walk along the fabulous trail system.
Tonight the Erin Ridge Ravine!
Completely to my surprise, tonight’s walk included something unexpected.
Vibrant communities have their own way of expressing themselves, and nearby residents have added what could be described as an eclectic art installation to this trail. The community has done a wonderful job of adding something truly unique and fun to their local environment, that encourages others to add their own touches.
We know as #EXSM3989 students a surprise is an important device that can be used in an engaging story.
Educational Tutorials. 2016. “How to Write a Great Short Story – The 8-Point Story Arc.” https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0HEqI3pJIM
Which when coupled with suspense can captivate readers…
I attempted to build a bit of suspense around the unexpected find. Using a mini cliff hanger, which is an important, yet sometimes considered cheap and overused as a writers’ tool. Hopefully I didn’t fall into that trap!
TED-Ed (2017) “How to make your writing suspenseful” by Victoria Smith. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xjKruwAfZWk
We know the medium of Twitter can accentuate the cliff hanger by building up to the unexpected happening or surprise in one or two tweets. Also, a ‘beat’ much like comedic timing can be added, perhaps a GIF to further build the excitement or suspense. The big reveal then happens in subsequent Tweets, which I tried to employ!
You can read all about my unique discovery it in my latest twitter thread here:
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